We are third, fourth and fifth graders from a public school in San Francisco's Tenderloin Neighborhood. This blog is a project of Robyn Carter's classroom (Room 2). It's a place to share our art and writing with other kids and teachers.
Friday, October 28, 2016
Monday, October 24, 2016
Thursday, October 20, 2016
Wednesday, October 19, 2016
Tuesday, October 11, 2016
Thursday, October 6, 2016
Wednesday, October 5, 2016
SUN SPLASH BY MUHAMMAD, AGE 8
Sun Splash
The sun shines on the jungle.
It is full of trees and sticks. The weather is warm.
The dust flies in the air.
The leaves fall
down from the trees.
It is morning time.
The birds are flying through the branches.
The sunlight is splashing on the ground.
The wind blows and the leaves swoosh.
The water is warm and the leaves are wet. The air tastes like dust.
A man cuts the trees down. The stick drifts on the water.
Some of the trees
shade the ground.
The sun shines on half of the trees and half of them are shaded.
Here is the same piece as a graphic poem!
Thursday, September 29, 2016
JUMPING AND FALLING by Royal, age 8
Jumping and Falling
The boys try to kick the ball,
jumping and falling.
Grass waves through the dirt.
Dust floats through the air.
The sky is a little bit cloudy.
I wonder if god is real.
What if I was a singer on this soccer field?
My voice would echo.
I would feel nervous.HERE IS THE SAME PIECE AS A GRAPHIC POEM!
KICKED by Sebastian, age 8
Kicked
Little dots of brown water fly through the air.
One of the soccer ball’s pentagon-shaped patches
is missing.
The kids run on mud and a little bit of grass.
They stand in a line
for a second.
The goal post’s thick dark red-brown
wood waits for the ball.
The gray sky makes it look like they are playing in a cave.
I can hear splashing water and wind.
The ball is drifting through the air.
The mud splatters on the ground.
The grass sways around the goal post.
The heat waves the air.
I am afraid of getting hit by the ball and slipping.
I am thankful because I am not there to hit my head.
I wonder where that place is.
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