Wednesday, May 21, 2008

Attack of the Ninjas by Yong, age 10



Jo’s dad was a scientist. He studied time travel and helped Jo build a time portal. The time portal was shaped like a dragon. It was in a museum and someone put a magic spell on the portal. Jo used it to unleash ninjas that cut off someone’s head and robots that loved to kill people.

The ninjas were off to town They built weapons and cannons and battleships. The ninjas were too quick to be seen. They used the cannons to shoot the army and used the battleships to destroy the navy. The ninjas were killing everybody.

The Commander said to the governor, “The ninjas are destroying everything.

“Send in the soldiers and the air force,” said the governor.

“You search west and you search north and we will search south and east,” said the Commander. The air force searched the whole city.

The general said, “I am going to end the battle now!” The general built atomic missiles.

“What are you going to do?” said the commander.

“I am going to bomb my city,” said the general. “Tell everybody to evacuate, well almost everybody, some people are already killed.”

“Five, four, three, two, one, launch,” said the commander.

A soldier said, “Do you think we forgot anything?”

“No,” said the commander. But they did. The general was sleeping on the floor. He woke up in the command center flying up in the sky. He realized he was dead. Jo and his dad were too. They were laughing at the general.

“Curse you!” he yelled. He saw the ninjas in the place he went to after he died.

About the Author

Hi, my name is Yong. This is my third published book. I am also the author of My Face Is Made out of Gold and Yong and the Dragon. It is very fun to play videogames like PSP PlayStation 3 and Xbox 360. I am ten years old. I live with my mom and dad and cousin and grandpa in San Francisco.

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