We are third, fourth and fifth graders from a public school in San Francisco's Tenderloin Neighborhood. This blog is a project of Robyn Carter's classroom (Room 2). It's a place to share our art and writing with other kids and teachers.
Wednesday, June 18, 2008
Bumpy and the Icebird by Kenny, age 9
Bumpy, Cutie and Bubble were at the Power House. The Power House had thunder, water, grass, fire and ice candy.
When they came in, Cutie said, “The man that gave thunder candy to Bumpy has to be here.” Then the man came.
“I am sorry to keep you waiting,” said the man. “I am looking for the Icebird. She will come out later. Right now she is resting up.”
When Bumpy, Bubble and Cutie came out of the Powerhouse, the man gave thunder candy to Bumpy and Bumpy ate it. The thunder went into Bumpy’s tail. The tail was gold and it was beautiful. The three friends went home. Bubble said, “Bumpy, your body is gold too.”
Suddenly there was a crash.
Cutie said, “Look the Icebird is freezing the whole town.’’
“What makes you say that, Cutie?” asked Bubble.
“Look,” shouted Cutie.
“Oh no,” Bubble said. “The Icebird froze us but not Bumpy.”
Bumpy ran so fast. Bumpy ran away from the house. The Icebird was mad at Bumpy so she tried to crush him but his gold body crushed the Icebird back because the candy gave him powers.
The Icebird said, “I will crush you with my ice power and you will die.”
Then Bumpy and the Icebird ran into each other. Bumpy tried to rest but he couldn’t because if he did, he would die and he didn’t want to die, so he kept going. Bumpy used his thunder power to push back the Icebird and she fell down in a hole dull of fire and lava and she died. The frozen house melted because the lava from the hole splashed on the street and made it so hot.
Bubble hugged Cutie and Bumpy. The man that gave Bumpy the thunder candy said, “Thank you.”
About the Author
Hi! My name is Kenny. I am nine years old. I like Pokemon and my favorite subjects are Writers’ Workshop and drawing. My biggest fear is getting bugs in my house. I am also the author of Bumpy’s Day.
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