Wednesday, June 10, 2009
Dimension Problem by Jason, age 10
A blurry spiral appeared on the screen and Hammond and Raphael went spinning into it. They entered the War! They touched the ground and their hands went through but not their feet. Everything was transparent.
“I am thirsty,” said Hammond.
“Get your own!” said Rafael. Hammond drank all his water.
“I am still thirsty!”
Hammond removed his gun and bonked Rafael with it. “Why did I do that!” said Hammond.
“It's ok,” said Rafael, getting up.
“DIE!!!” Hammond said and he bonked Rafael. “Oh, well.” Hammond removed his shovel from his backpack and dug a hole and buried Rafael.
In a few minutes, Rafael dug himself out of the dirt. Flies buzzed around. It smelt like manure.
“Now where is Hammond?” Rafael looked around.
“Must suck blood,” said a voice.
Rafael turned around and looked behind him. A whole army of zombies came toward him. Their bones stuck out. Their eyes shined like a star. Rafael shot all the zombies with his shoulder cannon and ran. He saw a motorcycle, got on it and rode it away. He looked at the deserted world. He felt cold and drove up to space.
Rafael sensed someone was in trouble. He saw a large pyramid made of zombies. Rafael sped away and the zombies were gone. He pressed the EXCELERATE button. Then he found a person lying down. It was Hammond!!! He looked injured and wounded. Rafael stopped and picked him up. He put and him in a small cart and took him to an abandoned hospital. Rafael found an elixir on a shelf and gave it to Hammond, and after he drank it, he healed and his injury disappeared from his skin. Hammond quickly got up and found a plane. They got on and flew it away. While on the plane, Rafael pointed to a space satellite through the window.
“It will have lots of food, equipment to kill monsters and… aaaa? Hammond?”
Hammond’s face transformed into a purple balloon and his cheeks puffed out. Rafael found an astronaut suit in the closet. After Hammond put it on, his face deflated and the purple faded from his skin. Rafael and Hammond looked out the window. They landed on the satellite.
“Now what was I going to say?” Rafael said, getting out of the plane.
An android was heading for Rafael.
“What’s up, Zack?” said Rafael.
“Fine,” said the android in a robotic voice. “Nothing has changed." Rafael and Hammond created Zack.
Zack lead Rafael and Hammond to a room.
“Well, I need your help,” Rafael said.
“What is it?” asked Zack.
“We need to get out of this dimension,” Rafael said. “Right Hammond?”
When Rafael turned around, he saw Hammond exploring the spaceship.
“Now get in here,” Said Zack.
Rafael and Hammond entered a tube and Rafael's fingers turned into stone. His eyes turned red. Rocks stuck to him. He became a large rock monster.
Scales erupted on Hammond’s skin. His buckteeth formed into sharp razor fangs. His blue eyes turned red. He grew two extra legs.
“Hey,” said Hammond, “that’s no fair, you get to be a big, tough, fat and ugly monster and I don’t!”
“SHUT UP!!!!!” said Zack “We have to kill the warlord, Zurk.”
“EMERGENCY!” said the recorded voice. “Zurk has arrived!”
Zurk blasted the door open and said, “Surrender or you will be destroyed by my wrath.”
“You’re crazy! Take that for coming here, DUDE!” Hammond kicked Zurk on the face and his face exploded. His head flew through the ceiling of the ship and into outer space. Suddenly, the sky filled up with an explosive firework from the head.
Hammond and Rafael went inside a capsule on the satellite. They were back to normal. They crashed and had a big tantrum. Their bodies shrunk back to normal. The capsule shook and flames flared and the capsule headed for the portal that showed the planet Earth. They blasted into it and landed on the roof of Rafael’s house.
They went to the dump to throw away the Wii and found George Bush throwing a fit at a garbage bag. He murmured that he got fired for the president. He said he wanted it. So he took it.
About the Author
Hi, my name is Jason. I am ten. I live with my mom, dad, sister, and grandma. I am good at many games like Yu-gi-oh, Bakugan, and a lot of other things. I want to be a bit more advanced in sports. I am also the author of Curses and Goshi and the Dragons.
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